He was at his wit’s end. He had
run out of options. The letter in his hand was not good news at all. He looked
at his wife sleeping in the bed and pondered deeply. She was going to lose it
all in a few days’ time. A beautiful compound in the middle of the city. A bungalow. Five bedrooms. Spacious. The house was going to be sold off by the bank. He had
fallen into some hard times and couldn’t make the payments on his mortgage.
He hardly slept that night
Rrrrrriiiiiinnnngggggggg Rrrriiiiinnnnnggg
He dragged himself out of bed. He
could smell the aroma of fried eggs from the kitchen. His wife had always been an early
bird. Beautiful. loyal. Hardworking. She knew nothing so she was humming away to the radio in the Kitchen.
Rrrrrriiiiinnnggggg Rrrrrriiinngggg
8.30 a.m.
He had hardly slept due to the worry worry.
The house was going.
Hello?
Good Morning Sir. My name is blah
blah blah from the Bank of …..
I am going through your paperwork
at my desk and would like you to come by for a small chat
Blah blah blah
He wondered what else the bank
had to say. Were they kicking him out earlier?
Sssshhhhhhh……. The sound of
frying in the kitchen
More humming in the kitchen
He adjusted his necktie and run
his hand through his unkempt beard one more time. A quick glance at the mirror.
The receeding hairline was no welcome sight especially in this times. The children were away at the University.
Coat adjusted. Necktie
strengthened again. He breathes in and walks to the kitchen.
'I am going out briefly' he murmurs
to his wife.
‘Your breakfast !’ she shouts as
he shuts the door behind him
She makes some more remarks behind his back but his mind is too clogged to listen
More shouting? He walks on
...........
The young man at the bank - Smart Pants we shall call him- had a
sly smile on his face. His eyes were cheeky and he wanted to make small talk. Our Mr. Depressed is in no mood. Smart Pants was all over the place making small
talk. Mr Depressed sits still. Uninterested. Depressed! He could only envisage the sight of
his property being thrown out of his home. The cries of his wife. The faces of
the neighbours. He slumps furthe rin the seat dejected. The eyes itch and grow wet. The soft leather chairs of the bank were no comfort
at this moment. ‘Calm down and do not make a scene’ he tells himself. His
tongue was dry and he waited the bad news.
So, Mr……. (Smart Pants begins)
Like I said on the phone…Well,
let me start by telling you story ...
Mouth dry no mood for stories but
well…. Mr Depressed thought.
Smart pants continues
At age seven, my father called a
meeting one early morning to tell us that our home was going to be sold by the
bank. I recall the look on my father’s face as he spoke. At that young age, my
face sunk as he narrated what that meant. The next day however, Dad returned
with a bright smile. He mentioned that a certain kind man whose name was (at
this point the young banker reveals Mr Depressed’s name) had so graciously
refused to sell the house.
Mr. Depressed tries to remember
the name of Smart Pant’s father. His eyes widen just a bit as he recalls the
surname. It was that jittery Deputy City Clerk he remembered. He had begged for
an extension of his mortgage when hard time had come to bite. Mr. Depressed had
given him a fresh lease of life. The house had been saved.
So Smart Pants was now saying
some exciting words. The words were like water to the drought struck plant
called Mr. Depressed.
‘I have never forgotten your name
Sir. I would like to repay the favour too.’ I am giving you an extension with
no pressure. Pay as and when you are able. The bank Management has agreed with
me that you are too valuable a customer to lose’
Hand shakes
Hugs
Mr. Depressed was depressed no
more
Now, that fried egg Madam was
preparing. I also have a story for her
There was a bounce in his step
that morning as he left the bank
One good turn deserves another
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Wow thx for this Dr.its always good to light someone's candle everyday, I am still in suspense waiting for part 2😃
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